Dr. Jamie Bondage

Serena: I sighed, then smiled, determined to be positive. "So...what do you want to do? we could watch a movie..." I looked at him helplessly. I did't want to be ...

Serena: I sighed and kissed him back. He tasted sweet...inviting... reassuring. I felt was so hard watching him. He couldn't go anywhere. I knew he was an active person, he ...

Serena: I sighed worriedly. "I hate it when you hurt!" I complained. I sat on the floor looking up at him miserably. I was still in my pjs which hardly ...

Hey! Welcomed to yws! I'm glad you're enjoying the site. If you have any questions, or if you just want to talk, feel free to pm me. Jamie

First for gramatical errors: 1. Baby, I don’t what to do anymore; "Know" should be after don't. 2. Do you even know what love? "Is" should be after love. I ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Jamie. If you need critiques, feel free to pm me, and I'll take a look. Another way to get critiques is to go to the ...

Okay, like you said, it's not long. Therefore, there's not much to correct. Your off to a good start though. I saw one error. "He went to met his girlfriend..." ...

Secuna: I blushed as I realized how I was acting. "N-no. I still want to learn." I said shyly. What had come over me?! I was being so stupid! I ...

Serena: I couldn't take the suspense anymore. I made sure there were no nurses around before getting out of the bed an dressing quickly. I hurt slightly, but I'd be ...

**Lol. Not really. she's just known him a day. =p But...Staton needs to wake up eventually. lol.** Secuna: I blushed and bit my lip, nodding shyly. He bent down slowly, ...

Bragi: I chuckled as I watched her dance away. I quickly ate the delicious apple, and through the core down onto the ground. I raced after her lithe figure, reveling ...

Secuna: I looked up at him and kissed his cheek. "Thanks." I said blushing. "For that. I really hate guys like that." I blushed. I probably could've polverized him, but ...

Secuna: I nodded and blushed as I slipped the red shorts off, revealing more of my vulumptuous body. I tried not to think about Mike starring as I walked out ...

First for specifics: 1. I didn't like to sleep much and I wasn't an insomniac. Contractions are bad writing. Izm sorry. a few are okay, and in dialogue it's fine, ...

Bragi: I chuckled. "You are such a tease sometimes. But if you insist." I rambled of poem of love and beauty, spinning the tale of the alluring Goddess in front ...